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obsteve
26-Aug-12, 03:39

Love Song
I would appreciate any feedback on a love song, which you can hear by clicking on the link and downloading it (save to file).

www.act2cam.com

Words and vocals by Obsteve, Music and Uke by Obteddy. The song is for one of our short films, about a lonely man whose huge feet are an obstacle to him finding true love.

I would be very grateful for any feedback. (The song is in it's infancy, so be as objectively critical as you like, positive and negative comments received equally).

The names are fake but the love is real  

obsteve
28-Aug-12, 15:47

Hey you cads I'm laying my heart out here, and not one comment?

Praise or scorn, no problm, but apathy? Did anyone listen?

brigadecommander
28-Aug-12, 22:52

get some music in there!!
i like it but i bet it would go over a lot better with a little guitar keeping you company.Please post it again when you do this.thanks.
zombieslayer1
29-Aug-12, 06:10

Great vocals and lyrics. I like BC's idea of guitar rather than the uke. I didn't comment because I didn't want to be critical, but the uke is quite out of tune. For me, the juxtaposition of a great voice next to an out of tune instrument can be a little difficult to listen to. There is nothing wrong with the uke playing, however. I think it's great as well. So now that I think about it, the uke may be the right instrument if you want to keep it light and breezy, just have it more in tune. I know they can be difficult to tune!

Other than that, I think it's great!
obsteve
29-Aug-12, 12:45

Thanks   I have recorded a guitar version, but the director asked for uke (and Teddy is one of our students so I can't really justify cutting him!). I'll get you a link to it if you like, though I think the uke version has a much more carefree feel.

Also, I was on telly last night  

www.bbc.co.uk

that's me playing the bouncer at 0:30

Next stop Hollywood  
zombieslayer1
29-Aug-12, 13:05

It won't let me play the video because I'm not in the UK   I hate it when they do that.
obsteve
29-Aug-12, 13:10

haha! probably for the best  
stealth-invader
16-Mar-13, 10:29

I would have loved to see, or hear something, but nothing was available.
obsteve
29-Mar-13, 09:22

You can hear it on this short film
by ACT 2 CAM:

www.youtube.com



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