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stalhandske
06-Dec-20, 04:56

Excellent poetry
This is one of the poems that has moved me most, "The Raven" by Edgar Allan Poe

Once upon a midnight dreary, while I pondered, weak and weary,
Over many a quaint and curious volume of forgotten lore—
While I nodded, nearly napping, suddenly there came a tapping,
As of some one gently rapping, rapping at my chamber door.
“’Tis some visitor,” I muttered, “tapping at my chamber door—
Only this and nothing more.”

Ah, distinctly I remember it was in the bleak December;
And each separate dying ember wrought its ghost upon the floor.
Eagerly I wished the morrow;—vainly I had sought to borrow
From my books surcease of sorrow—sorrow for the lost Lenore—
For the rare and radiant maiden whom the angels name Lenore—
Nameless here for evermore.

And the silken, sad, uncertain rustling of each purple curtain
Thrilled me—filled me with fantastic terrors never felt before;
So that now, to still the beating of my heart, I stood repeating
“’Tis some visitor entreating entrance at my chamber door—
Some late visitor entreating entrance at my chamber door;—
This it is and nothing more.”

Presently my soul grew stronger; hesitating then no longer,
“Sir,” said I, “or Madam, truly your forgiveness I implore;
But the fact is I was napping, and so gently you came rapping,
And so faintly you came tapping, tapping at my chamber door,
That I scarce was sure I heard you”—here I opened wide the door;—
Darkness there and nothing more.

Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there wondering, fearing,
Doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before;
But the silence was unbroken, and the stillness gave no token,
And the only word there spoken was the whispered word, “Lenore?”
This I whispered, and an echo murmured back the word, “Lenore!”—
Merely this and nothing more.

Back into the chamber turning, all my soul within me burning,
Soon again I heard a tapping somewhat louder than before.
“Surely,” said I, “surely that is something at my window lattice;
Let me see, then, what thereat is, and this mystery explore—
Let my heart be still a moment and this mystery explore;—
’Tis the wind and nothing more!”

Open here I flung the shutter, when, with many a flirt and flutter,
In there stepped a stately Raven of the saintly days of yore;
Not the least obeisance made he; not a minute stopped or stayed he;
But, with mien of lord or lady, perched above my chamber door—
Perched upon a bust of Pallas just above my chamber door—
Perched, and sat, and nothing more.

Then this ebony bird beguiling my sad fancy into smiling,
By the grave and stern decorum of the countenance it wore,
“Though thy crest be shorn and shaven, thou,” I said, “art sure no craven,
Ghastly grim and ancient Raven wandering from the Nightly shore—
Tell me what thy lordly name is on the Night’s Plutonian shore!”
Quoth the Raven “Nevermore.”

Much I marvelled this ungainly fowl to hear discourse so plainly,
Though its answer little meaning—little relevancy bore;
For we cannot help agreeing that no living human being
Ever yet was blessed with seeing bird above his chamber door—
Bird or beast upon the sculptured bust above his chamber door,
With such name as “Nevermore.”

But the Raven, sitting lonely on the placid bust, spoke only
That one word, as if his soul in that one word he did outpour.
Nothing farther then he uttered—not a feather then he fluttered—
Till I scarcely more than muttered “Other friends have flown before—
On the morrow he will leave me, as my Hopes have flown before.”
Then the bird said “Nevermore.”

Startled at the stillness broken by reply so aptly spoken,
“Doubtless,” said I, “what it utters is its only stock and store
Caught from some unhappy master whom unmerciful Disaster
Followed fast and followed faster till his songs one burden bore—
Till the dirges of his Hope that melancholy burden bore
Of ‘Never—nevermore’.”

But the Raven still beguiling all my fancy into smiling,
Straight I wheeled a cushioned seat in front of bird, and bust and door;
Then, upon the velvet sinking, I betook myself to linking
Fancy unto fancy, thinking what this ominous bird of yore—
What this grim, ungainly, ghastly, gaunt, and ominous bird of yore
Meant in croaking “Nevermore.”

This I sat engaged in guessing, but no syllable expressing
To the fowl whose fiery eyes now burned into my bosom’s core;
This and more I sat divining, with my head at ease reclining
On the cushion’s velvet lining that the lamp-light gloated o’er,
But whose velvet-violet lining with the lamp-light gloating o’er,
She shall press, ah, nevermore!

Then, methought, the air grew denser, perfumed from an unseen censer
Swung by Seraphim whose foot-falls tinkled on the tufted floor.
“Wretch,” I cried, “thy God hath lent thee—by these angels he hath sent thee
Respite—respite and nepenthe from thy memories of Lenore;
Quaff, oh quaff this kind nepenthe and forget this lost Lenore!”
Quoth the Raven “Nevermore.”

“Prophet!” said I, “thing of evil!—prophet still, if bird or devil!—
Whether Tempter sent, or whether tempest tossed thee here ashore,
Desolate yet all undaunted, on this desert land enchanted—
On this home by Horror haunted—tell me truly, I implore—
Is there—is there balm in Gilead?—tell me—tell me, I implore!”
Quoth the Raven “Nevermore.”

“Prophet!” said I, “thing of evil!—prophet still, if bird or devil!
By that Heaven that bends above us—by that God we both adore—
Tell this soul with sorrow laden if, within the distant Aidenn,
It shall clasp a sainted maiden whom the angels name Lenore—
Clasp a rare and radiant maiden whom the angels name Lenore.”
Quoth the Raven “Nevermore.”

“Be that word our sign of parting, bird or fiend!” I shrieked, upstarting—
“Get thee back into the tempest and the Night’s Plutonian shore!
Leave no black plume as a token of that lie thy soul hath spoken!
Leave my loneliness unbroken!—quit the bust above my door!
Take thy beak from out my heart, and take thy form from off my door!”
Quoth the Raven “Nevermore.”

And the Raven, never flitting, still is sitting, still is sitting
On the pallid bust of Pallas just above my chamber door;
And his eyes have all the seeming of a demon’s that is dreaming,
And the lamp-light o’er him streaming throws his shadow on the floor;
And my soul from out that shadow that lies floating on the floor
Shall be lifted—nevermore!
chaz-
07-Dec-20, 16:07

...Poe was excellent with words and easily admired.
mo-oneandmore
07-Dec-20, 16:32

Poe
To me, Edgar Allen Poe is one of the greatest

Here's The Bells.
www.nationalbellfestival.org
zorroloco
07-Dec-20, 17:14

The Raven
Is immortal

stalhandske
07-Dec-20, 22:39

Mo-one
<To me, Edgar Allen Poe is one of the greatest >

Here, our tastes are the same! Thanks for reminding me of "The Bells". Absolutely magnificent!
Here's another poem by Poe that I love, Annabel Lee

It was many and many a year ago,
In a kingdom by the sea,
That a maiden there lived whom you may know
By the name of Annabel Lee;
And this maiden she lived with no other thought
Than to love and be loved by me.

I was a child and she was a child,
In this kingdom by the sea,
But we loved with a love that was more than love—
I and my Annabel Lee—
With a love that the wingèd seraphs of Heaven
Coveted her and me.

And this was the reason that, long ago,
In this kingdom by the sea,
A wind blew out of a cloud, chilling
My beautiful Annabel Lee;
So that her highborn kinsmen came
And bore her away from me,
To shut her up in a sepulchre
In this kingdom by the sea.

The angels, not half so happy in Heaven,
Went envying her and me—
Yes!—that was the reason (as all men know,
In this kingdom by the sea)
That the wind came out of the cloud by night,
Chilling and killing my Annabel Lee.

But our love it was stronger by far than the love
Of those who were older than we—
Of many far wiser than we—
And neither the angels in Heaven above
Nor the demons down under the sea
Can ever dissever my soul from the soul
Of the beautiful Annabel Lee;

For the moon never beams, without bringing me dreams
Of the beautiful Annabel Lee;
And the stars never rise, but I feel the bright eyes
Of the beautiful Annabel Lee;
And so, all the night-tide, I lie down by the side
Of my darling—my darling—my life and my bride,
In her sepulchre there by the sea—
In her tomb by the sounding sea.
archduke_piccolo
08-Dec-20, 01:01

Narrative poems...
... have a certain charm of their own - like this one:

The Green Eye of the Yellow God (J. Milton Hayes)

Thereʼs a one-eyed yellow idol to the north of Khatmandu,
Thereʼs a little marble cross below the town,
Thereʼs a broken-hearted woman tends the grave of Mad Carew,
And the yellow god for ever gazes down.


He was known as ʻMad Carewʼ by the subs at Khatmandu,
He was hotter than they felt inclined to tell,
But for all his foolish pranks
He was worshipped in the ranks,
And the Colonelʼs daughter smiled on him as well.


He had loved her all along
With the passion of the strong,
The fact that she loved him was plain to all,
She was nearly twenty-one,
And arrangements had begun
To celebrate her birthday with a ball.


He wrote to ask what present she would like from Mad Carew,
They met next day as he dismissed a squad,
And jestingly she told him then that nothing else would do
But the green eye of the little Yellow God.


On the night before the dance Mad Carew seemed in a trance,
And they chaffed him as they puffed at their cigars,
But for once he failed to smile,
And he sat alone awhile,
Then went out into the night beneath the stars.


He returned before the dawn
With his shirt and tunic torn.
And a gash across his temples dripping red.
He was patched up right away,
And he slept all through the day,
And the Colonelʼs daughter watched beside his bed.


He woke at last and asked if they could send his tunic through.
She brought it and he thanked her with a nod.
He bade her search the pocket saying “Thatʼs from Mad Carew,”
And she found the little green eye of the god.

She upbraided poor Carew
In the way that women do,
Though both her eyes were strangely hot and wet;
But she wouldnʼt take the stone, and Carew was left alone
With the jewel that heʼd chanced his life to get.


When the ball was at its height
On that still and tropic night,
She thought of him and hastened to his room.
As she crossed the barrack square
She could hear the dreamy air
Of a waltz-tune softly stealing throʼ the gloom.


His door was open wide, with silver moonlight shining through;
The place was wet and slippy where she trod;
An ugly knife lay buried in the heart of Mad Carew.
ʼTwas the ʻVengeance of the Little Yellow God.ʼ


Thereʼs a one-eyed yellow idol to the north of Khatmandu,
Thereʼs a little marble cross below the town,
Thereʼs a broken-hearted woman tends the grave of Mad Carew,
And the Yellow God for ever gazes down.

Incidentally, the six-stanza philippic against the evil Duke of Romney (a fictitious character) on my profile page is my own.
brigadecommander
08-Dec-20, 01:29

''The spotted hawk swoops by and accuses me—he complains of my gab and my loitering.
I too am not a bit tamed—I too am untranslatable;
I sound my barbaric yawp over the roofs of the world.

The last scud of day holds back for me;
It flings my likeness after the rest, and true as any, on the shadow’d wilds;
It coaxes me to the vapor and the dusk.

I depart as air—I shake my white locks at the runaway sun;
I effuse my flesh in eddies, and drift it in lacy jags.

I bequeathe myself to the dirt, to grow from the grass I love;
If you want me again, look for me under your boot-soles.

You will hardly know who I am, or what I mean;
But I shall be good health to you nevertheless,
And filter and fibre your blood.

Failing to fetch me at first, keep encouraged;
Missing me one place, search another;
I stop somewhere, waiting for you''. Walt Whitman.
archduke_piccolo
08-Dec-20, 11:40

Interesting!
Of what or whom was Walt Whitman writing? The end of the day? The dew, perhaps? Or evening mist? Or his own life's ending?

If the last, here's another with the same motif from Alfred, Lord Tennyson:
'Crossing the bar':

Sunset and evening star,
And one clear call for me!
And may there be no moaning of the bar,
When I put out to sea,

But such a tide as moving seems asleep,
Too full for sound and foam,
When that which drew from out the boundless deep
Turns again home.

Twilight and evening bell,
And after that the dark!
And may there be no sadness of farewell,
When I embark;

For tho' from out our bourne of Time and Place
The flood may bear me far,
I hope to see my Pilot face to face
When I have crost the bar.


archduke_piccolo
08-Dec-20, 11:43

It was Whitman's ...
... end of day setting that reminded me if this, from Thomas Hardy.

The Darkling Thrush
BY THOMAS HARDY

I leant upon a coppice gate
When Frost was spectre-grey,
And Winter's dregs made desolate
The weakening eye of day.
The tangled bine-stems scored the sky
Like strings of broken lyres,
And all mankind that haunted nigh
Had sought their household fires.

The land's sharp features seemed to be
The Century's corpse outleant,
His crypt the cloudy canopy,
The wind his death-lament.
The ancient pulse of germ and birth
Was shrunken hard and dry,
And every spirit upon earth
Seemed fervourless as I.

At once a voice arose among
The bleak twigs overhead
In a full-hearted evensong
Of joy illimited;
An aged thrush, frail, gaunt, and small,
In blast-beruffled plume,
Had chosen thus to fling his soul
Upon the growing gloom.

So little cause for carolings
Of such ecstatic sound
Was written on terrestrial things
Afar or nigh around,
That I could think there trembled through
His happy good-night air
Some blessed Hope, whereof he knew
And I was unaware.
mo-oneandmore
08-Dec-20, 12:52

Stalh
Thanks for posting "Annabel Lee".

I don't recall ever having read it and I have an EAP book somewhere. 
brigadecommander
08-Dec-20, 19:53

William Shakespeare makes History again
I know this is not a poem. But it is very poetic nonetheless.

''Yesterday, in the UK, William Shakespeare was the second Man vaccinated against covid19!!.www.youtube.com




'“O! how shall summer's honey breath hold out, / Against the wrackful siege of battering days?”
William Shakespeare

archduke_piccolo
09-Dec-20, 12:11

Something equally contemporarily apt...
T.S. Eliot: The Hollow Men


Mistah Kurtz-he dead
A penny for the Old Guy


I

We are the hollow men
We are the stuffed men
Leaning together
Headpiece filled with straw. Alas!
Our dried voices, when
We whisper together
Are quiet and meaningless
As wind in dry grass
Or rats' feet over broken glass
In our dry cellar

Shape without form, shade without colour,
Paralysed force, gesture without motion;

Those who have crossed
With direct eyes, to death's other Kingdom
Remember us-if at all-not as lost
Violent souls, but only
As the hollow men
The stuffed men.


II

Eyes I dare not meet in dreams
In death's dream kingdom
These do not appear:
There, the eyes are
Sunlight on a broken column
There, is a tree swinging
And voices are
In the wind's singing
More distant and more solemn
Than a fading star.

Let me be no nearer
In death's dream kingdom
Let me also wear
Such deliberate disguises
Rat's coat, crowskin, crossed staves
In a field
Behaving as the wind behaves
No nearer-

Not that final meeting
In the twilight kingdom


III

This is the dead land
This is cactus land
Here the stone images
Are raised, here they receive
The supplication of a dead man's hand
Under the twinkle of a fading star.

Is it like this
In death's other kingdom
Waking alone
At the hour when we are
Trembling with tenderness
Lips that would kiss
Form prayers to broken stone.


IV

The eyes are not here
There are no eyes here
In this valley of dying stars
In this hollow valley
This broken jaw of our lost kingdoms

In this last of meeting places
We grope together
And avoid speech
Gathered on this beach of the tumid river

Sightless, unless
The eyes reappear
As the perpetual star
Multifoliate rose
Of death's twilight kingdom
The hope only
Of empty men.


V

Here we go round the prickly pear
Prickly pear prickly pear
Here we go round the prickly pear
At five o'clock in the morning.

Between the idea
And the reality
Between the motion
And the act
Falls the Shadow
For Thine is the Kingdom

Between the conception
And the creation
Between the emotion
And the response
Falls the Shadow
Life is very long

Between the desire
And the spasm
Between the potency
And the existence
Between the essence
And the descent
Falls the Shadow
For Thine is the Kingdom

For Thine is
Life is
For Thine is the

This is the way the world ends
This is the way the world ends
This is the way the world ends
Not with a bang but a whimper.
archduke_piccolo
09-Dec-20, 12:19

The Hollow Men -
Not a poem of beauty, withal, but one raw with anger - or at least, that is how I read it. Death is rather late to offer regret or penitence for the sins of a lifetime - the sins of men with great power and no humanity.

Speaking of which, observe that the US House of Representatives has passed a Bill cementing in Perpetual War. US Troops may not be withdrawn from oversea deployment 'without sufficient reason'. More Republicans voted against the Bill than did Democrats.

Anyone surprised?
brigadecommander
09-Dec-20, 18:23

archduke
great poems all. And everyone else also.
riaannieman
10-Dec-20, 04:21

This first piece isn't exactly poetry, but it is a stunning piece of literature and I have loved it since my mother (an English teacher) first read it to her high school class while I was sitting quietly in a corner listening (circa 1978). We were living in Walvis Bay, which is now part of Namibia, and the people there were notoriously bad at English; very often I spoke the language much better than my teachers. I have always loved Shakespeare, and the old English he used fascinates me to this day.

Once more unto the breach, dear friends, once more

(from Henry V, spoken by King Henry)

Once more unto the breach, dear friends, once more;
Or close the wall up with our English dead.
In peace there's nothing so becomes a man
As modest stillness and humility:
But when the blast of war blows in our ears,
Then imitate the action of the tiger;
Stiffen the sinews, summon up the blood,
Disguise fair nature with hard-favour'd rage;
Then lend the eye a terrible aspect;
Let pry through the portage of the head
Like the brass cannon; let the brow o'erwhelm it
As fearfully as doth a galled rock
O'erhang and jutty his confounded base,
Swill'd with the wild and wasteful ocean.
Now set the teeth and stretch the nostril wide,
Hold hard the breath and bend up every spirit
To his full height. On, on, you noblest English.
Whose blood is fet from fathers of war-proof!
Fathers that, like so many Alexanders,
Have in these parts from morn till even fought
And sheathed their swords for lack of argument:
Dishonour not your mothers; now attest
That those whom you call'd fathers did beget you.
Be copy now to men of grosser blood,
And teach them how to war. And you, good yeoman,
Whose limbs were made in England, show us here
The mettle of your pasture; let us swear
That you are worth your breeding; which I doubt not;
For there is none of you so mean and base,
That hath not noble lustre in your eyes.
I see you stand like greyhounds in the slips,
Straining upon the start. The game's afoot:
Follow your spirit, and upon this charge
Cry 'God for Harry, England, and Saint George!'
riaannieman
10-Dec-20, 04:31

Then I see you mentioning Walt Whitman, but the piece that first introduced me to his poetry are the famous words in that memorable film Dead Poet's Society: O Captain! My Captain! The story moved me and I decided to read the entire poem. Then I started reading his poetry, and found it very much to my liking:

O Captain! my Captain! our fearful trip is done,
The ship has weather’d every rack, the prize we sought is won,
The port is near, the bells I hear, the people all exulting,
While follow eyes the steady keel, the vessel grim and daring;
But O heart! heart! heart!
O the bleeding drops of red,
Where on the deck my Captain lies,
Fallen cold and dead.

O Captain! my Captain! rise up and hear the bells;
Rise up—for you the flag is flung—for you the bugle trills,
For you bouquets and ribbon’d wreaths—for you the shores a-crowding,
For you they call, the swaying mass, their eager faces turning;
Here Captain! dear father!
This arm beneath your head!
It is some dream that on the deck,
You’ve fallen cold and dead.

My Captain does not answer, his lips are pale and still,
My father does not feel my arm, he has no pulse nor will,
The ship is anchor’d safe and sound, its voyage closed and done,
From fearful trip the victor ship comes in with object won;
Exult O shores, and ring O bells!
But I with mournful tread,
Walk the deck my Captain lies,
Fallen cold and dead.
riaannieman
10-Dec-20, 05:07

Deleted by riaannieman on 10-Dec-20, 20:47.
archduke_piccolo
10-Dec-20, 11:53

There is...
... a lot of meaning in that poem, about forgiveness and grudge-keeping, memory and forgetfulness.
It has long been my belief that to forgive is to forget, and to forget is to forgive. This applies at personal and social levels. The story could be as much about the state of the world today as it was 120 years ago; and equally throughout the whole of human history.
stalhandske
10-Dec-20, 20:42

Riaan
That is a truly beautiful poem. Riaan, I think there is some discrepancy in that the very last part of the English translation is missing in the Afrikaans original, and comes in an odd order....
riaannieman
10-Dec-20, 20:44

Yes I see it now. Please allow me to fix it. Something went wrong. I am sorry.
riaannieman
10-Dec-20, 20:47

This is another favorite of mine, by an Afrikaans poet called Totius. I post the Afrikaans version of the poem with the English translation below it. It is my own translation and I understand that a lot is lost in translation, but the poem is really beautiful in Afrikaans.

It alludes to the English which annexed the country piece by piece, and especially when gold and diamonds were discovered, declared war in the fledgling country. Two wars followed, and the women and children were interred in concentration camps. That is the wound, because after the second Anglo/Boer war there were a huge lack of females. This led to decline in the population growth for many years.

Vergewe en vergeet - Totius

Daar het 'n doringboompie
vlak by die pad gestaan,
waar lange ossespanne
met sware vragte gaan.

En eendag kom daarlanges
'n ossewa verby,
vat met sy sware wiele
dwars-oor die boompie ry.

"Jy het mos, doringstruikie,
my ander dag gekrap;
en daarom het my wiele
jou kroontjie plat getrap."

Die ossewa verdwyn weer
agter 'n heuweltop,
en langsaam buig die boompie
sy stammetjie weer op.

Sy skoonheid was geskonde;
sy bassies was geskeur;
op een plek was die stammetjie
so amper middeldeur.

Maar tog het daardie boompie
weer stadig reggekom,
want oor sy wonde druppel
die salf van eie gom.

Ook het die loop van jare
die wonde weggewis -
net een plek bly 'n t e k e n
wat onuitwisbaar is.

Die w o n d e word gesond weer
as jare kom en gaan,
maar daardie m e r k word groter
en groei maar aldeur aan.

Forgive and forget

There stood a little thorn tree
very close to the road
where long ox teams
went with heavy wheels

One day there passed by
an ox team
which with its heavy wheels
drove across the little tree

"You, little thorn bush,
scratched me the other day;
and that is why my wheels
run your over your top."

The ox-wagon disappeared again
behind a hilltop
and in time the little tree unbent
its trunk straight again

It's beauty was marred
it's bark was torn
at one spot the trunk
was almost shorn

But still that little tree
started to repair
because over its wounds beaded
the salve of its own gum

Also the passage of years
washed the wounds away
only on one place stays a mark
that cannot be eradicated

The wounds heal again
as years come and go
but that mark grows larger
and always grows
riaannieman
10-Dec-20, 20:48

Sorry about that, something went wrong when I copied and pasted the translation from MS Word to this thread. But it is corrected now.
brigadecommander
11-Dec-20, 00:13

they go low...we go high
I think this is the best thread in any club on gameknot. By far. Most others are full of dissonance. That's the World we live in. But this thread soars high above that. So i have a few favorites i can add to this Superlative collection.



“The Road Not Taken”
Two roads diverged in a yellow wood,
And sorry I could not travel both
And be one traveler, long I stood
And looked down one as far as I could
To where it bent in the undergrowth;

Then took the other, as just as fair,
And having perhaps the better claim,
Because it was grassy and wanted wear;
Though as for that the passing there
Had worn them really about the same,

And both that morning equally lay
In leaves no step had trodden black.
Oh, I kept the first for another day!
Yet knowing how way leads on to way,
I doubted if I should ever come back.

I shall be telling this with a sigh
Somewhere ages and ages hence:
Two roads diverged in a wood, and I—
I took the one less traveled by,
And that has made all the difference. Robert Frost.

''Not like the brazen giant of Greek fame,
With conquering limbs astride from land to land;
Here at our sea-washed, sunset gates shall stand
A mighty woman with a torch, whose flame
Is the imprisoned lightning, and her name
Mother of Exiles. From her beacon-hand
Glows world-wide welcome; her mild eyes command
The air-bridged harbor that twin cities frame.
“Keep, ancient lands, your storied pomp!” cries she
With silent lips. “Give me your tired, your poor,
Your huddled masses yearning to breathe free,
The wretched refuse of your teeming shore.
Send these, the homeless, tempest-tossed to me,
I lift my lamp beside the golden door!”. Emma Lazarus 1849
archduke_piccolo
11-Dec-20, 12:20

Emma Lazarus -
- Unfortunately the sentiments and welcome expressed no longer apply, and haven't done (or rarely) for quite some time. Whatever the socio-political reality of the time, there was a spirit of freedom abroad in the US at the time this poem was published. It is hard to think of it now.

The sylvan setting of 'The Road Not Travelled' reminded me of this, although the topic is not the same. My main hobby is war gaming with miniatures, which requires the creation of settings as well as armies. One of its beguiling aspects is the number of projects that might be undertaken, and THAT can mean taking several roads at once.

By that I mean, taking up one project, and, whilst half way through, taking up another. Another blogger mentioned this, to which I responded thus. Readers might detect a certain Tolkien influence here...:

Projects go ever on:
Building rock and building tree,
Hills and woods where no sun has shone,
And streams that reach the edge - no sea;

Over snow by flour strewn,
Or grass-mat cornfield in steamy June;
From deepest night to highest noon,
From brightest day to darkest moon -

Projects go ever on.
The plastic and metal soldiers tread,
Uniforms to be painted on,
Blue and green and white and red... (Me)

And here, from 'The Hobbit'

Roads go ever ever on,
Over rock and under tree,
By caves where never sun has shone,
By streams that never find the sea;
Over snow by winter sown,
And through the merry flowers of June,
Over grass and over stone,
And under mountains in the moon.
Roads go ever ever on
Under cloud and under star,
Yet feet that wandering have gone
Turn at last to home afar.

Eyes that fire and sword have seen
And horror in the halls of stone
Look at last on meadows green
And trees and hills they long have known. (Tolkien)
brigadecommander
11-Dec-20, 12:28

archduke
I love it!!! In my dreams i live in Lothlórien. In the real World i live in the Forest.

''"In that dream I thought the eastern sky grew dark and there was a growing thunder, but in the West a pale light lingered, and out of it I heard a voice, remote but clear, crying:
Seek for the Sword that was broken:
In Imladris it dwells;
There shall be counsels taken
Stronger than Morgul-spells.
There shall be shown a token
That Doom is near at hand,
For Isildur's Bane shall waken,
And the Halfling forth shall stand." Tolkien
archduke_piccolo
13-Dec-20, 00:45

Facing death...
A couple of poems in this thread have been about facing death - approaching the end of one's days. It was whilst looking over one of my old annotation on this site, titled 'The Prairie' (it's still on the 'Best Annotations' list) that I ran across a quote from the Marquis of Montrose, from his 144-line poem that I added by way of a comment at the end of the game.

But rather than list that one, here is the verse Montrose, facing a horrible execution, is said to have written with the point of a diamond upon the window of his prison cell.

'Let them bestow on every airth a limb,
Then open all my veins, that I may swim
To Thee, my Maker, in that crimson lake;
Then place my par-boil'd head upon a stake,
Scatter my ashes, strew them in the air;
Lord! since thou knowest where all these atoms are,
I'm hopeful thou'lt recover once my dust,
And confident thou'lt raise me with the just.'

It was said around about that time that the Scottish Kirk 'delighted not in unbloody sacrifices.'

brigadecommander
13-Dec-20, 02:47

64 squares
''poem is peace, chess is war
poem is ease, chess is scar
poem is heart, chess is mind
poem is art, chess science
poem is inspiration, chess is *******
poem is emotion, chess is reason
poem is love, chess logic
poem is nostalgic, chess futuristic
poem is life, chess is death
poem is joy, chess regret
poem is smile, chess is frown
poem is commoner, chess is crown
poem is beautiful, chess is serious
poem is Persephone, chess is Icarus
poem is light, chess darkness
poem is more, chess is less
poem is free, chess confined
poem is timeless, chess is timed
poem is high-spirited, chess is nervous
poem is silent, chess is famous
poem is blissful, chess uncertain
poem is forever, chess is beginning
poem is generosity, chess is sacrifice
poem is welcome, chess is goodbye
poem is garden, chess battlefield
poem is human, chess is machine
poem is heaven, chess is the world
poem is pen, chess is sword'' Joselito M Lagazo
brigadecommander
13-Dec-20, 03:03

persistence....
;They’ve left. They’ve all left.
The pigeon feeders have left.
The old men on the benches have left.
The white-gloved ladies with the Great Danes have left.
The lovers who thought about coming have left.
The man in the three-piece suit has left.
The man who was a three-piece band has left.
The man on the milkcrate with the bible has left.
Even the birds have left.
Now the trees are thinking about leaving too.
And the grass is trying to turn itself in.
Of course the buses no longer pass.
And the children no longer ask.
The air wants to go and is in discussions.
The clouds are trying to steer clear.
The sky is reaching for its hands.
Even the moon sees what’s going on.
But the stars remain in the dark.
As does the chess player.
Who sits with all his pieces
In position.''Howard Altmann
stalhandske
13-Dec-20, 03:04

Archduke's quotation of the death verse by Marquis of Montrose is very appropriate as this year it is the 370th anniversary of his death
stalhandske
13-Dec-20, 03:09

A comment on Altman's poem:

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